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March 23rd, 2007

we will not do this anymore @ 11:04 pm


it reminds me of a story i want to write
about these two friends
like a friend i once had

how would i tell this story?

-- would i start with birds?

EXTERIOR SHOT
FOREST
BIRD IN TREE (SINGING)
SECOND BIRD RESPONDS AND JOINS

it could get very long winded

but i want to tell the love story
and how it got perverted
you know
from being about "how can i make loving more fun for us?"
to
"I don't trust You"
"here are all the ways I'm going to lie to you"
"these are all the ways I'm going to FUCK YOU OVER because you love me and I can get away with it, you stoopid SMUCK"

am i losing you here?

of course, sorry

like all those men standing on the peer
just watching

"hey, maybe we should join in and actually do something..."

watching him getting beaten to a pulp

This Story is not about the Redemption of Man
it's just about one man...



fuck this story
coz it gets better, you know
how I can lie to you and myself!

even back then
maybe there were cops or the media
and they could tell the truth
but now the mob has become the State
has become the Market
has bought out Everyone
and now it's cops and robbers with spy technology
and tomorrow there'll be cyber-space
and implants

...

One lover looks at the other

let's just say two men in a bar
two men over the counter of the police department

one lover looks at the other
and his love turns to violent anger
mixed with unconditional loving
but he puts his heels down
SO HARD
that all the colors bleach out of everything
a wave of light ripples out from him
and the two brothers are not on planet earth anymore
in the human story
they're back Home
or Here
or in Heaven
or whatever you'll call it
where everything is honest and real
and you can't pull the wool over your's or anyone else's eyes
and he looks into her eyes and says
NO, WE WILL NOT DO THIS ANYMORE
IT IS TIME TO FIND ANOTHER WAY
 
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