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January 26th, 2007

50 words @ 09:41 pm

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walking with my mother
i see a man with his wife

she points
he glances towards her finger's aim
mumbling response

while gazing at me

my spine quivers

his hand visits his crotch
before picking up the item
of his wife's interest

my mom says
"are you hungry, dear?"




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the roof of my mouth
split wide open
blossoming down my throat

his cock taking root in my body

i couldn't gasp
or breathe anything but him

his milk pouring into me
the tilt of his hip eradicating my consciousness

shuddering
grunting
flailing
panting


a second of eternity




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in my mouth
he's already on edge

in my ass
how close is he?

they're both moaning


he pulls my arms back
while shoving into me

i hum
as he loses it


i put one hand on his heart
and place the other on his chest

connection complete

connection

 
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From:that_dang_otter
Date:January 27th, 2007 06:01 am (UTC)
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Oooh, I think that last one counts as a thousand and fifty words.

What a photograph. Lucky bitch! ;-)
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From:dominicvine
Date:January 27th, 2007 07:12 am (UTC)
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seeing that the last "story" was from a real event that happened last week
i thought i may as well illustrate it

... pity i didn't have any good quality photographs ...
i had to take a screen capture from the movie my camera made sitting on the dresser..

(wink)

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From:dmt81
Date:January 27th, 2007 07:43 am (UTC)
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The poem & photo together are even more powerful. Most people wouldn't think of "connection complete" by just looking at that photo.
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From:dominicvine
Date:January 28th, 2007 09:23 am (UTC)
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i'm always trying to connect the root chakra to the crown

it's usually only a moment
but in that moment
(there's forever)
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From:dennisatl
Date:January 27th, 2007 01:31 pm (UTC)
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was wondering how you came by this photo
and thought must be from video
I'd seen it from what you wrote
even more beautiful now that I see it entire
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From:dennisatl
Date:January 27th, 2007 07:35 pm (UTC)

and, apropos of this, a little

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I caught Nay for a quick chat on skype today and in haste
he mistyped "coordimate" for "coordinate", which I cracked back
was what you have to do to manage more than one partner at a time
So this is you being beautifully coordimated
Makes me wish I was a sculptor; I'd hire you to pose for me
I'm sure L would jump at the chance to stand very, very still for
long hours at a time.
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From:dominicvine
Date:January 28th, 2007 09:21 am (UTC)

Re: and, apropos of this, a little

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Jump?

Stand?

Hours?

no: he's restless while awake
- the era (and ethnics) of constant productivity

the boy always has to have something in his mouth
... or be in someone's...


... and it's "wish i were"

as in
"i wish i were a lesbian and not a hetero!"
(as stated by Louden Wainwright)
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From:fotornalez_drif
Date:January 27th, 2007 07:40 am (UTC)
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whoa.
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From:dominicvine
Date:January 28th, 2007 09:21 am (UTC)
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which part?
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From:fotornalez_drif
Date:January 28th, 2007 06:54 pm (UTC)
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everything in the post.
i'm not able to truly free myself like that right now. that's all.
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From:clarkelane
Date:January 27th, 2007 09:38 am (UTC)
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These offerings are very nice. I love the illustration.
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From:dominicvine
Date:January 28th, 2007 09:19 am (UTC)
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so the picture pales the text?
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From:clarkelane
Date:February 1st, 2007 01:15 pm (UTC)
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That's not exactly what I meant... I'm a visul guy and images always speak to me.
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From:lolitasir
Date:February 26th, 2007 05:57 pm (UTC)
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Wow! That last one was beautiful. I love how the photo punctuated the prose.
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From:dominicvine
Date:February 28th, 2007 07:52 am (UTC)
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Thanks!

and this serves as a good reminder
: we need to get that book made!

i'll be in town for one week before i head to hawaii

-- it must be then!


(beautiful ... brand? is that on your arm?)
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From:lolitasir
Date:February 28th, 2007 01:09 pm (UTC)
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It's a cutting on my arm. That photo is from the first time it was cut in 1998. I've had it cut twice again since then. It has left a very light scar. I'll show it to you the next time I see you.

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